saaaincha vaarta:kya aap jaante hain

ab pata naheen ye sahi jagah hai ki naheen par ek huk mein vyaakaran ya vartani sudhaar aavashyak hai. "ki naishanal hockey league ki stainali cup trophy 89.54 seinteemeetar oonchi aur 15.5 kilogram vajan hai." isko aisa kare:

• ki naishanal hockey league ki stainali cup trophy 89.54 seinteemeetar oonchi aur 15.5 kilogram vajani hai.

• ki naishanal hockey league ki stainali cup trophy 89.54 seinteemeetar oonchi aur 15.5 kilogram vajan ki hai.

dhanyavaad!--peeyoosh (vaarta)^yogadaan 07:36, 26 January 2015 (UTC)

sujhaav ke liye dhanyavaad. yeh upayukt sthaan hai.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 08:13, 26 January 2015 (UTC)

aapke mere sujhaav ke thoda alag sudhaar karne ke baad ek aur vyaakaran sudhaar karna hoga:"ki naishanal hockey league ki stainali cup trophy ki ooainchaai 89.54 semi aur bhaar 15.5 kilogram hai."--peeyoosh (vaarta)^yogadaan 08:20, 26 January 2015 (UTC)

... ki koi bhi bhaarateeya naagrik, Bhaarat sarkaar ke digital laukar mein apne sabhi dastaavej surakshit rakh sakta hai. --chandra shekhar/Shekhar 06:42, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

lekh mein "suraksha" naamak anubhaag ka auchitya samajh mein naheen aaya. kuchh aur bhi kamiyaaain hain lekin unhein sudhaarana aasaan hai.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 13:17, 25 July 2015 (UTC)

sameeksha ke baad yadi jaldi hi sudhaar naheen kiye jaate hain to lekh ko sameeksha se baahar kiya ja sakta hai at: aapse anurodh hai ki jaldi hi sudhaar karke yahaaain suchit karein.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 19:01, 15 August 2015 (UTC)

... ki aarti gagan mai thaal ka uchchaaran guru naanak Dave ne jagannaath mandir, puri mein kiya tha?— is ahastaaksharit sandesh ke lekhak hain -Manojkhurana (vaarta • yogadaan) 17:32, 22 August 2015‎ (UTC)

lekh ki pehli pankti mein "gagan mai thaal, rav chand deepak bane..." likhne se vaakya mein adhuraapan prateet hota hai. krupaya ise sudhaarein tatha "paath va anuvaad" naamak anubhaag mein koi ek sandarbh jodein. isi anubhaag ki antim pankti ke baad upayukt viraam chinh ka prayog karein, duhara vismayaadibodhak chinh (!!) arthaheen prateet ho raha hai. lekh mein anko mein ekaroopata (ya to naagari athva arabi) laayein.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 19:50, 31 August 2015 (UTC)

..ki Britain ki vartamaan mahaaraani elijaabeth II United Kingdom par sabse adhik samay (63 varsh 7 maheene se adhik) tak shaasan karne waali shaasak hain.

kya aap jaante hain ke liye uparokt pankti naamit ki. --chandra shekhar/Shekhar 06:49, 11 September 2015 (UTC)

pehli baat to lekh ka naam elijaabeth dviteeya (sanyukt raajashaahi) se badalkar keval elijaabeth dviteeya kar dena chaahiye kyonki elijaabeth dviteeya ke roop mein yeh sabse prachalit vyakti rahi hain aur inhein saath mein sthaan ka ullekh karne ki aavashyakta naheen hai.

lekh ka vartamaan svaroop mukhaprushth par naheen laaya ja sakta kyonki lekh ka adhiktar bhaag anya bhaasha mein likha hua hai.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 19:15, 11 September 2015 (UTC)

@sanjeev Kumar: ji, @Manojkhurana aur satyam mishr: ji prabandhak hone ke naate naam to aap hi badal sakte hain, mujhe bhi naheen maaloom ki is lekh ke sheershak mein sanyukt raajashaahi kyon laga hua hai jabki is naam ki koi jagah duniya mein naheen hai. mujhe jahaaain-2 yeh shabd dikhta hai main use badalkar United Kingdom kar deta hooain. khair aap sheershak sahi kar dein, anuvaad to main kar hi raha hooain. kya aap jaante hain mein daalne par is prushth par shaayad aur logon ka bhi dhyaan jaaye aur vo bhi kuchh madad karein. baaki jaankaari to theek aur daalne laayak hai. --chandra shekhar/Shekhar 09:06, 15 September 2015 (UTC)

@Manojkhurana, satyam mishr, sanjeev Kumar, anunaad Singh, aur Mala chaubey: ji, krupya is jaankaari ko nirvaachit karein. mainne mukhya lekh ka anuvaad bhi poora kar diya hai va manoj ji ne punarnideshan bhi sahi kar diya hai. --chandra shekhar/Shekhar 15:34, 21 September 2015 (UTC)

Y - post kiya. --manoj khuraana 06:26, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

dhanyavaad @Manojkhurana: ji, vaise ek galati ho gayi hai, chitr elijaabeth ka laga hai lekin (chitrit) javaaharalaal Nehru ke aage likha hua hai. chandra shekhar/Shekhar 06:36, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

dhyaan dilaane ke liye dhanyavaad @chandra shekhar: ji, theek kar diya hai. --manoj khuraana 07:14, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

...ki pratyek varsh 14 sitmbar ko hindi diwas manaaya jaata hai. --raaj chauhaan ^vaartaalaap 04:15, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

niymaavali ke anusaar lekh mein 5 se adhik srotaheen tathya naheen hone chaahiye. apne yahaaain par 3-4 anubhaag hi sandarbhaheen hain.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 06:20, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

...ki mi ait di joo Youtube par upload kiya gaya pehla vidiyo hai. raaj chauhaan ^vaartaalaap 09:31, 23 September 2015 (UTC)

1. @Rajchauhan4301:: raaj ji, koi faayda naheen yahaaain koi sujhaav dene ka, mukhprushth par nit nai jaanakaariyaaain daalkar use chalaayamaan rakhane ka kaam sirf prabandhak kar sakte hain aur un sabhi ko ismein koi dilchaspi naheen hai. aap mukhaprushth ke vibhinn anubhaagon ke liye jo kuchh bhi prastaavit kareinge use nirvaachit hone mein yahaaain barso lag jaayeinge. --chandra shekhar/Shekhar 10:06, 23 September 2015 (UTC)

yeh tathya nishchit hi rochak hai kintu niymaavali ke anusaar lekh aakaar mein kam se kam 1200 kairaiktar ka hona chaahiye jabki abhi vah 400 kairektar ke aas paas hi hai. at: iska thoda vistaar karein. --manoj khuraana 06:26, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

@manoj khuraana ji, dhanyavaad! ab ismein vistaar kiya ja chuka hai, ab ismein 1700 karaiktar se oopar hai, krupaya ise post karne ka kasht karein. --raaj chauhaan ^vaartaalaap 04:36, 29 September 2015 (UTC)

Y - post kiya. --manoj khuraana 14:29, 29 September 2015 (UTC)

... ki raashtreeya janataantrik gathabandhan, Narendra Modi (chitrit) ke netrutv mein, bhaarateeya sansad ka sattaaroodh gathabandhan hai? bhaarateeya29 (vaarta) 10:28, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

yeh jaankaari na hi rochak hai aur naahi nayi hai, hamaare hi naheen balki tamaam anya deshon ke logo ko bhi yeh baat pata hai. kuchh aisa hona chaahiye jiske adhikaansh logo ko maaloom hone ki sambhaavana kam ho. --chandra shekhar/Shekhar 13:10, 8 October 2015 (UTC)

... ki raashtreeya janataantrik gathabandhan ke sansthaapak sadasyon mein keval shivsena hi aisa dal tha jiski vichaaradhaara gathabandhan ke sabse bade dal bhaarateeya janta party ki vichaaradhaara ke samaan thi? bhaarateeya29 (vaarta) 10:25, 9 October 2015 (UTC)

mujhe bhi lagta hai ki huk mein kuchh sudhaar kiya jaaya to rochakata aur nai jaankaari donon aa sakti hai. theek oopar diya gaya huk ya fir "ki raashtreeya janataantrik gathabandhan me kul paintees sadasya hain jinmein maatr bhaajapa hi ek raashtreeya party hai!" jaisa kuchh banaaya ja sakta hai. --styam mishr ^baatcheet 11:02, 9 October 2015 (UTC)

satyam mishr ji ka huk kaafi rochak hai. mein chaahooainga ki usako praathamikta mile. bhaarateeya29 (vaarta) 17:11, 12 October 2015 (UTC)

bhaarateeya29 ji, huk ka paryaapt rochak hona aavashyak naheen hai lekin vartamaan huk ki rochakata use vipreet le jaati hai kyonki Bhaarat sarkaar pichhle 25 varshon se gathabandhan sarkaaron ke roop mein chalti rahi hai aur vartamaan mein bhaajapa ke saath poorn bahumat hote huye bhi yeh ek gathabandhan sarkaar hai. iska arth yeh hai ki vahaaain koi na koi sarkaar to sattaaroodh rahati hi hai. Narendra Modi ke pradhaanamantri bante hi ise "mukhaprushth samaachaar" anubhaag mein likh diya gaya tha at: iski rochakata niymaavali ke anusaar pun: prakaashit karne ke liye uchit naheen hai.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 08:12, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

... ki raashtreeya janataantrik gathabandhan ke sansthaapak sadasyon mein keval shivsena hi aisa dal tha jiski vichaaradhaara bhaajapa ki vichaaradhaara ke samaan thi? bhaarateeya29 (vaarta) 10:28, 23 November 2015 (UTC)

@Bharatiya29: aapke dvaara sujhaaya gaya huk lekh mein maujood hai iske saath jude sandarbhon mein aisa mujhe naheen mila. arthaat huk ki satyata ka koi pramaan naheen hai.

sambhav ho to lekh ki sambandhit pankti yahaaain bhi quote mein likhi jaaye.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 11:43, 29 November 2015 (UTC)

Only the Maharashtran-based Shiv Sena can be said to share the BJP's Hindu nationalist ideology. Most of the rest are regional parties that find it in their interests to ally with the BJP, because their principal rival is the Congress or a party allied to the Congress. bhaarateeya29 (vaarta) 17:32, 2 December 2015 (UTC)

... ki ragbi union vishv cup vijeta ko William web Alice cup (chitrit) se sammaaneet kiya jaata hai. -- Darth Whale ^vaarta 08:21, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

krupaya sandarbhon mein sudhaar karein tatha unamein aavashyakataanusaar {{cite web}}, {{cite news}} jaise saaainchon ka prayog karein.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 08:17, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

kya laki daayamand rich ko kya aap jaante hai mein naheen rakh sakte kyonki ye duniya ke aise pehle hai jinhonne sampoorn shareer par godane banaae hue hai saath hi ye gineej world rikaurds mein bhi jude hue hai apne keertimaan ke liye .raaju suthaar^vaarta 17:38, 6 December 2015 (UTC) @raaju suthaar: ji, bilkul rakh sakte hain, lekin vaakya kya hai jise aapne naamaankit kiya hai? --chandra shekhar/Shekhar 08:13, 9 December 2015 (UTC)

...ki laki daayamand rich shareer par sabse jyaada godane vaale pehle vyakti hai .raaju suthaar^vaarta 19:10, 10 December 2015 (UTC)

N-@raaju suthaar:, aapke dvaara sujhaaya gaya huk achha hai, tathya bhi lekh mein uddharanasahit maujood hai. kintu niymaavali ke anusaar - lekh aakaar mein kam se kam 1200 kairaiktar ka hona chaahiye. krupaya lekh ka aavashyak vistaar karein. --manoj khuraana 08:33, 9 January 2016 (UTC)

...ki mamooti dakshin Bhaarat ke pehle aise film abhineta hai jinke paas 369 kaare hai . raaju suthaar^vaarta 19:14, 10 December 2015 (UTC)

N- @raaju suthaar:niymaavali ke anusaar yeh anivaarya hai ki huk lekh ke andar inalaain uddharan ke saath hona chaahiye.--manoj khuraana 08:24, 9 January 2016 (UTC)

... ki Bhaarat desh mein koi bhi raashtreeya bhaasha naheen hai, yahaaain tak ki hindi bhi naheen! --raaj chauhaan ^vaarta 17:58, 19 December 2015 (UTC)

Bhaarat aur hindi lekh "kya aap jaante hain" (poorv pradarshit) mein kai baar aa chuke hain.--Sfic (vaarta) 18:24, 19 December 2015 (UTC)

fir bhi Sfic ji, ye sabhi se alag hai. --raaj chauhaan ^vaarta 04:36, 20 December 2015 (UTC)

@RacIndian:- raaj ji, krupaya ek baar niymaavali dekh lein. krupaya yeh kanfarm karein ki uparokt tathya donon mein se kisi lekh mein uddharanasahit avashya diya gaya ho. jis lekh mein yeh varnit hai, us lekh ko bold kar sakte hain. --manoj khuraana 08:27, 9 January 2016 (UTC)

... ki India mark too vishv ka sarvaadhik vyaapak roop se sanchaalit haindapamp hai. (lekh mein pramukh yogadaan -@Teacher1943:)--manoj khuraana 06:17, 9 January 2016 (UTC)

@sanjeev Kumar, Mala chaubey, aniruddh!, Manojkhurana, satyam mishr, aur Hunnjazal: - krupaya dhyaan dein.--manoj khuraana 12:50, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

-Y poorn hua - 5 din tak koi aapatti/virodh naheen.--manoj khuraana 13:40, 14 January 2016 (UTC)

... ki dastageer saahib mein hajrat abu bakar dvaara likhi gayi kuraan ki ek prati maujood hai. (lekh mein pramukh yogadaan @Hunnjazal:) --manoj khuraana 12:49, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

@Manojkhurana aur Hunnjazal: mainne apne anumaan anusaar dastageer saahib ko mukhya maankar ise bold kar diya hai. lekh mein do hi sandarbh the jo mujhe mukhaprushth par jaane vaale lekh ke hisaab se kuchh kam prateet ho rahe the at: kuchh aur jodne ka prayaas kiya. isi kram mein ek sandarbh aisa bhi mila jo isi naam ke vyakti ke hone ka bhi pramaan de raha hai. mainne vaarta:dastageer saahib par likha hai. krupaya apni rai dein. saath hi is lekh mein ek pairaagraaf aur joda ja sakta to bada achha rahata. --styam mishr ^baatcheet 07:33, 18 January 2016 (UTC)

... ki himaalaya mein pakshi ki ek nai prajaati ka pata chala hai, jiska naam bhaarateeya pakshi-vigyaani saleem Ali ke naam par joothera saleemaali naam rakha gaya hai.
... ki poorvottar Bhaarat mein gyaat pakshi ki nai prajaati ka naam bhaarateeya pakshi-vigyaani saleem Ali ke sammaan hetu joothera saleemaali rakha gaya hai.
... ki joothera saleemaali Bhaarat ke aajaadi ke baad khoji gayi chauthi nai prajaati hai. jiska naam bhaarateeya pakshi-vigyaani saleem Ali par rakha gaya hai.
iske lekh ko angreji ke lekh anusaar himaalayi van chidiya sheershak rakha hai. --Sfic (vaarta) 11:26, 22 January 2016 (UTC)

Sfic ji, abhi lekh bahut chhota prateet ho raha hai.--manoj khuraana 02:30, 26 January 2016 (UTC)

@Manojkhurana: ji, main lekh ko thoda bada banaane ki koshish kar raha hooain. shaayad yeh ab 1200 kairektar se adhik ho chuka hai. --Sfic (vaarta) 11:39, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

lekh ka jnyaaanasandook abhi tak hindi mein naheen hai. lekh mein sandarbhon mein sudhaar ki aavashyakta hai.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 16:57, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

@sanjeev Kumar: ji, jnyaaanasandook ko hindi mein kar liya. sandarbh mein kya sudhaar karna hai? --Sfic (vaarta) 14:09, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

• post kiya.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 15:29, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

...ki freedam 251 Bhaarat ka sabse sasta endrauid phone hai jiski keemat maatr 251 rupaye hai . raaju suthaar^vaarta 14:24, 20 fravari 2016 (UTC)

phone abhi baajaar mein naheen aaya hai aur bahut se sandarbhon ke anusaar abhi tak yeh ek ghotaala ho sakta hai at: ise abhi adyatan naheen kiya ja sakta.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 16:58, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

...ki Jack haubs pratham shreni cricket mein sabse adhik shatak aur run banaane vaale ballebaaj hai?--peeyoosh ^{sadasya:hindusthaan vaasi (vaarta)} 08:32, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

• @sanjeev Kumar aur satyam mishr: kai maheenon se is vibhaag ka adyatan naheen hua hai. krupaya samay nikaal kar is taraf pahal karein.--peeyoosh ^{sadasya:hindusthaan vaasi (vaarta)} 12:11, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

lekh mein ek anubhaag "career" mein lagbhag sabhi kathan sandarbhaheen hain. ismein paaainch se adhik tathya sandarbhaheen hain. krupaya sandarbh badhaane ka prayaas karein.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 17:04, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

aur sandarbh jode gaye hai, krupaya jaaainch karein.--peeyoosh ^{sadasya:hindusthaan vaasi (vaarta)} 17:02, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

@sanjeev Kumar aur Hunnjazal: kya koi iski (dobaara) sameeksha karega?--peeyoosh ^{sadasya:hindusthaan vaasi (vaarta)} 13:55, 19 April 2016 (UTC)

• post kiya.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 15:12, 19 April 2016 (UTC)

... ki cheen ki lokapriya abhinetri bye yaang (chitrit) ko saanskrutik kraanti ke dauraan paaainch varsh kaaraavaas ki saja hui?

• angreji vikipeediya par 11 April ko subah pradarshit ho chuka hai.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 18:34, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

kuchh sudhaar sujhaavit hain:

• lekh mein vyakti ke baare mein sambodhan karti kriyaaon ke prayog mein aniyamitata hai, udaaharan ke liye kaheen ...gayi. par vaakya samaapt ho rahe hain kaheen ...gain. par. isi tarah thi/theen aur hui/huin ityaadi.
• anubhaag "poorv jeevan aur cheen-Japan yuddh" mein poorv shabd ka prayog kuchh theek naheen prateet ho raha, iski jagah "shurooaati"/"aaranbhik" ka prayog karein.
• uparokt anubhaag mein vaakya - "Shanghai ki giraavat ke baad chongking chaleen gayi jo cheen ki yuddh ke samay rajdhani thi." mein sudhaar ki aavashyakta hai (meri rai mein ise "Shanghai ke patan/Shanghai par Japani kabje ke baad ve chongking chali gayeen jo yuddhakaaleen cheeni rajdhani thi/yuddh ke samay cheen ki rajdhani thi." jaisa kuchh hona chaahiye.
• anubhaag "dviteeya-vishv yuddh ke baad" mein pehle vaakya mein filmon shabd ka duharaav hai.
• isi anubhaag mein doosare paira mein vaakya ka ant ...nimantrit kiya gaya. ki jagah ...aamantrit kiya gaya. hona chaahiye.

krupaya uparokt sudhaar sunishchit karein. --styam mishr ^baatcheet 05:50, 20 May 2016 (UTC)

... ki paintaanal vishv ka sabse vishaalakaaya aardrabhoomi/daladali bhoomi wala ushnakatibndheeya praakrutik kshetr hai. mukh prushth ke kya aap jaante hain anubhaag ke liye navanirmit prushth paintaanal se uparokt jaankaari daalne ka anurodh karta hooain.--chandra shekhar/Shekhar 12:23, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

lekh mein kuchh baatein samajh paana abhi bahut hi mushkil hai:

• paintaanal, pamtaanal athva pantaanal mein kaunasa shabd adhik shuddhata ke saath hai? keval usi ko prayukt kiya jaaye.
• purtagaali shabd pâaantano ka devanaagari uchchaaran bhi saath mein dena chaahiye. jisse paathakon ke liye suvidhaajanak rahe.
• "bhoogol" naamak anubhaag mein ek bhi sandarbh naheen hai.

aage ki sameeksha baad mein ki jaayegi.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 13:27, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

...ki 2016 Indian Premier league ka final match sunrisers Hyderabad ne jeeta . --raajoo suthaar 'svatantr'^vaarta 05:29, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

@raaju suthaar: jab kisi lekh ko "mukhaprushth samaachaar" se "kya aap jaante hain" mein naamaankit kiya jaata hai to sambandhit huk mein bhi aavashyak parivartan karna chaahiye. jaise "Indian Premier league ke 9vein sanskaran mein, pratham sanskaran ki ki vijeta aur upavijeta donon teemein pratibndhit thi." isi tarah ke aur bhi vibhinn huk ismein nirmit kiye ja sakte hain jo rochak tathya ke roop mein lagte hon. iske atirikt lekh ko naamaankit karne aur uske baad ke nikat samay mein lekh mein paryaapt sudhaar hone aavashyak hain. lekh ka vartamaan sanskaran aise pradarshit hai jaise yeh pratiyogita bhavishya mein hone waali hai jabki pratiyogita pehle hi sampann ho chuki hai. abhi tak lekh mein adhiktar jaanakaariyaaain adhoori hain.☆a★sanjeev Kumar (✉a✉) 05:59, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

@sanjeev Kumar: ji theek hai lekh mein jaise hi samay milta hai usamein jaankaari jod raha hooain .--raajoo suthaar 'svatantr'^vaarta 07:52, 31 May 2016 (UTC)